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Soul_Builder101
Thank you! I'm always happy to find a connection with someone.....I'm still floundering in my attempts to write these.
posted by
Krisles
on September 15, 2007 at 9:14 AM
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Justi
I'm sorry this struck you so negatively at first.....glad you came back for another read. My mood was not bad at all.....I was just in the mode of thinking of things I will counsel my granddaughters about.....from experience. Perhaps it was the sparseness of Haiku that caused them to seem so glum.
posted by
Krisles
on September 15, 2007 at 9:02 AM
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krisles
I came back to read it again. Nice, I know you are working hard.
posted by
Justi
on September 14, 2007 at 8:39 PM
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Krisles
you create a resonance...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 14, 2007 at 6:18 AM
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Krisles
In reading you, I glimpse flashes of me. Pioneers, I guess. Wonderful statement!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 13, 2007 at 6:25 PM
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Krisles
This is a bit or even more than a bit heavy feeling. i pray you will rise up and face the sun with a new feeling. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on September 13, 2007 at 4:57 PM
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