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SO AWESOME

posted by star4sky5 on September 14, 2007 at 10:42 PM | link to this | reply

kayley
Great poetry. Repairing the holes of the heart...I like that!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on September 13, 2007 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply

Kay
The struggles of love....  don't wait until I'm gone to love me.  Sometimes that's precisely what happens.  Nice work. 

posted by Troosha on September 13, 2007 at 1:44 PM | link to this | reply

do not hide them any longer some of emily dickens best work was found crumbled up thrown in drawers on the floor ect. very good work / spinner

posted by spinner on September 13, 2007 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

Tender stuff, Kayley. Both poems are. Yes, it is hard letting your poems out into public for the first time, but Blogit is a good place to do it. You will get plenty of feedback from other writers who have the same feelings and aspirations. It takes a lot of guts putting it out there. You'll get loads of support here, once you find the people you can connect with.

Good luck. I've stuck you on my favourites to read next time you post.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on September 13, 2007 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re:
so...what do you think? I've always kept my writing to myself this is the first time someone other than myself has ever seen them...

posted by kayleyd07 on September 13, 2007 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

Hey, welcome to Blogit. Let me be the first to read your poem...

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on September 13, 2007 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply