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.Dave
Thanks so much....this just is the way mine came out when I decided to give it a try...probably because I'm so wordy....but then, again, that's because I have so many thoughts and feelings about my favorite season (well, about most things!). You should definitely give it a try.
posted by
Krisles
on September 15, 2007 at 6:24 AM
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afzal50
Thank you! I appreciate your reading and commenting. I had fun writing it.
posted by
Krisles
on September 15, 2007 at 6:22 AM
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Enigmatic68
Thank you for reading....and for the nice comment.....it's encouraging!
posted by
Krisles
on September 15, 2007 at 6:21 AM
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Very good. I often write a haiku, but I rarely write a string of them as stanzas to a longer piece. Must have a go myself sometime, perhaps writing about the autumn as you have done. I am really looking forward to the changing colours. Last autumn was spectacular here.
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_dave_says_ack_
on September 13, 2007 at 5:57 AM
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Offy
on September 13, 2007 at 5:03 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on September 13, 2007 at 5:03 AM
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It's lovely and sweet poem .
posted by
afzal50
on September 12, 2007 at 9:34 PM
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Enigmatic68
on September 12, 2007 at 9:15 PM
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krisles
good attempt. Keep it up.
posted by
richinstore
on September 12, 2007 at 7:59 PM
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Soul_Builder101
Thank you for reading.....and the rose.......one can never have enough roses!
posted by
Krisles
on September 12, 2007 at 6:58 PM
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Nautikos
You may have created a monster, as I've already put up another post of them! I'm glad you liked....but I have a feelng I'm not supposed to keep going on and on and on....I can never seem to just shut up!
I enjoyed the link....most especially the poem....very expressive and speaks to the heart. And, I loved the cat haiku....I have two feline owners.
posted by
Krisles
on September 12, 2007 at 6:57 PM
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Ariala
Thank you.....it's always great to hear from you, but especially since I always loved your poetry.
posted by
Krisles
on September 12, 2007 at 6:53 PM
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TAPS
I'm so glad you liked....Fall has always been my favorite season. I have two fireplaces at my home in KC and always started them the minute a "snap" hit the air. Here in Dallas, my apt has a f/p, and I will probalby have to have the a/c on in order to burn in it!
posted by
Krisles
on September 12, 2007 at 6:52 PM
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FineYoungSinger
What a wonderful thing to read as my first comment on my first haiku....thank you so very much!
posted by
Krisles
on September 12, 2007 at 6:50 PM
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krisles
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 12, 2007 at 6:23 PM
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Krisles
Fabulous! I love them! you are really inspiring me to start again! I haven't had much time, so for now you can take a look at the two you find here, and there's another poem as well...
http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/Nautikos/382864
posted by
Nautikos
on September 12, 2007 at 5:02 PM
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Very good! Keep it up!
posted by
Ariala
on September 12, 2007 at 2:57 PM
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Wonderful, Krisles
That smell of wood smoke on the clear, crisp air, gets me every time.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 12, 2007 at 2:06 PM
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This was great
a group of haiku that created a single piece. I think you did an excellent job--especially since each haiku can stand alone and be complete, as well as be complete when read as one single work. very inventive!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on September 12, 2007 at 1:59 PM
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