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Re: .Dave.
Thank you very much :)) I love the villanelle too, when it's written just right. I wasn't sure if I'd picked the right subject for this, my first attempt! It had me tearing my hair out at one point! But overall in the end I think it says what I wanted it to say. Your comment really means a lot to me because I have been very ensure about this one - thank you
posted by
opheliablue
on September 22, 2007 at 2:12 PM
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Re: whoah...dig the writing style
Thank you MiaEllia :)
posted by
opheliablue
on September 22, 2007 at 11:09 AM
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Re: Great villanelle! This is such a hard poem to write---you did an excel
Thank you so much! I had been trying to write a villanelle for a long time and it ended up being about this, which made it harder in the end - I was tearing my hair out! But I'm quite happy with it now :) and your comment means a LOT to me x
posted by
opheliablue
on September 22, 2007 at 11:08 AM
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whoah...dig the writing style
posted by
MiaElla
on September 13, 2007 at 11:37 AM
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Great villanelle! This is such a hard poem to write---you did an excellent
job with it!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on September 13, 2007 at 6:03 AM
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Fantastic Ophelia. I love the villanelle - it allows for such haunting repetition. And when you can make it twist and turn as you've done here, you get a journey as well as a poem. One of my favourite poems of my own is a villanelle. A great start to my reads today. Cheers!
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on September 13, 2007 at 1:02 AM
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Re: Ophelia......
I wish it was more strange than it is... or really that it never happened at all to anyone :)
posted by
opheliablue
on September 12, 2007 at 3:21 PM
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Re: Wow.........sad.
Yeah... but it really helps to be able to write poems about it. I never used to be able to, about that one thing - but now I can and..I dunno...it makes me feel like I 'won' and he 'lost' somehow.
posted by
opheliablue
on September 12, 2007 at 3:20 PM
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Re: Well done! Chris.
Thank you
posted by
opheliablue
on September 12, 2007 at 3:17 PM
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Re: Dark, insightful. Excellent...
Thank you very much :)
posted by
opheliablue
on September 12, 2007 at 3:16 PM
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Wow.........sad.
posted by
justanotherskinnybitch
on September 12, 2007 at 2:28 PM
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Ophelia......
Strange experience!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 12, 2007 at 2:21 PM
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Well done! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 12, 2007 at 12:55 PM
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Dark, insightful. Excellent...
posted by
saul_relative
on September 12, 2007 at 12:46 PM
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