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Re: I dont really understand the haiku but I understand the poignancy and loss

proc--thanks very much--I guess the important thing is that you DO understand the 'feelings' central to the writing! Thank you again. Chris.

posted by Scramble on September 11, 2007 at 2:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hi Chris - enjoyable haiku - thank you!!

Hi Tony---thank you very much-I'm pleased you enjoy!Chris.

posted by Scramble on September 11, 2007 at 2:46 AM | link to this | reply

I dont really understand the haiku but I understand the poignancy and loss

here. Its a true picture of life.

posted by proc on September 10, 2007 at 2:58 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Chris - enjoyable haiku - thank you!!

posted by Antonionioni on September 10, 2007 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: scramble

Hello Lust---thank you so much! Chris.

posted by Scramble on September 10, 2007 at 12:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Scramble

Hello again Troosha---that's really nice to hear---for me-they both give the same basis-and I do feel that I would benefit from trying to slow down and go in deeper-looking for altenative words.I know you were not trying to re-write mine-don't worry and I have always loved and admired your work and wider or different 'words'.Now I'm loosing my train of thought-just-thank you.

posted by Scramble on September 10, 2007 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

scramble

these are all thought provoking good job

posted by Lanetay on September 10, 2007 at 10:23 AM | link to this | reply

Scramble

I wasn't trying to re-work your beautiful haiku it's just that your words "tears of a father" inspired a piece from me so I thought I'd share it with you..... In fact, I may do more of that because when I read your work, many thoughts come to mind.

posted by Troosha on September 10, 2007 at 10:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Scramble

Oh-that's just so tender and beautiful! It says the same as mine but in exquisit for! Thank you.I feel I must take more TIME-when writing mine.Thank you so much Troosha! Chris.