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Incredible concept & imagery!
posted by
roadscross
on September 10, 2007 at 8:34 PM
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Excellent work, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 10, 2007 at 1:58 AM
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again and again
I can only quote Rilke "Again and again, however we know the landscape of love and the little churchyard there, with its sorrowing names, and the frighteningly silent abyss into which the others
fall: again and again the two of us walk out together under the ancient trees, lie down again and again among the flowers, face to face with the sky."



posted by
nemonemo
on September 10, 2007 at 1:15 AM
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Re: waterfalling
Whoops, Thanks - heartbreak is messy bussiness - hopefully edited enough now! I need a Good pruning every now and then.
posted by
Waterfalling
on September 9, 2007 at 8:33 PM
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waterfalling
Edit your work. You have the talent!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 9, 2007 at 8:11 PM
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very nice
posted by
spinner
on September 9, 2007 at 6:42 PM
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Nice poem !
posted by
afzal50
on September 9, 2007 at 6:37 PM
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Heartworms - thanks!
posted by
Waterfalling
on September 9, 2007 at 5:06 PM
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amen!!! touching
posted by
heartworms
on September 9, 2007 at 5:02 PM
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