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posted by
NightMajik
on September 16, 2007 at 8:25 PM
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NightMajik
I don't think I've ever written a poem while waiting for a table. Wow, great idea. Hunger apparently inspires beautiful thought. Usually I'm describing to whomever I am with just how hungry I am or complaining of how long we are having to wait. What you do is much more productive and the time would pass more quickly.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 9, 2007 at 5:43 AM
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Excellently used descriptive powers.
posted by
Antonionioni
on September 9, 2007 at 3:53 AM
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I can almost see it / spinner
posted by
spinner
on September 8, 2007 at 8:05 PM
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Well described !
posted by
afzal50
on September 8, 2007 at 6:20 PM
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on September 8, 2007 at 5:56 PM
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