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                     JMO
                
                Nice.
 
                
                    posted by
                    jacentaOld
                     on August 31, 2007 at 7:48 PM
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                    I really like this...
                
                The first 3 lines gave me goosebumps!  It's quite chilling in a way.  I love the repetition of "It was you..." Nice one 
                
                    posted by
                    opheliablue
                     on August 30, 2007 at 10:04 AM
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                    JMO
                
                Now, which woman did that?
                
                    posted by
                    Soul_Builder101
                     on August 29, 2007 at 11:27 PM
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                    beautiful
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    star4sky5
                     on August 29, 2007 at 10:48 PM
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                    Lovely ! Well said !
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on August 29, 2007 at 10:31 PM
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                    Such imagery!!  Very well done, JMO...
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    saul_relative
                     on August 29, 2007 at 8:34 PM
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