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Re: The Inspector should have said, "We'd like you to come down to the station
welll...i didnt say it was the husban who was dead....it could be some body else too....i'm trying to write various teasers like this....star of a story and how the twist it takes...till that...the mystery remains.... for the reader....this is the first one....i'm writing the true indian scenario...
thank you for your suggestion :)
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alicemalice
on August 26, 2007 at 6:00 PM
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Re: bad practise, if it's here, the police will come home to say, how rude was
i'm sorry but in India, its like that...its raw....i was just trying ot give the real picture....:)
posted by
alicemalice
on August 26, 2007 at 5:56 PM
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bad practise, if it's here, the police will come home to say, how rude was
that to call and say
posted by
star4sky5
on August 26, 2007 at 5:51 PM
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The Inspector should have said, "We'd like you to come down to the station
or "Do you know where your husband is?" Inspectors don't usually hit a wife full force in the face with death, at least not right off the bat.
posted by
WindTapper
on August 26, 2007 at 3:44 PM
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