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Alaska is a dream world......
posted by
star4sky5
on August 26, 2007 at 10:15 AM
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Re: Re: spinner
thanks. I understand
posted by
spinner
on August 25, 2007 at 1:43 PM
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spinner
sorry I am not a stallker dude I just no good stuuf when I see it I read your introduction. you said some people jog some paint and you write poems you indeed do that, but you also paint, you paint with words. I would like to think I do the same. god bless / spinner
posted by
spinner
on August 25, 2007 at 1:42 PM
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Re: spinner
your basic "love not returned" poem, Alaska is a reference to my ideal of one day retiring to a place of beauty, its something I say at times, "when I'm old and my children are grown up, I'll end my days in Alaska, alone with nature". So "convinced Alaska will blow her away" signifies both the desire that once I reach Alaska the love for her would fade away, but also the idea that if we went together I'm sure she would enjoy it like me. Its an old poem, about an old love, old emotions that faded without the help of Alaska. Hope it helps!
posted by
Kjoil
on August 25, 2007 at 1:39 PM
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spinner
forgive me I like the way you wrote this poem for what ever reasons I like it. but for the life of me I can not figure it out could you please explain I would like to no. I am stumped. Thank you / spinner
posted by
spinner
on August 25, 2007 at 1:27 PM
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