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Re: Scramble
Yes-they are total opposites! Thank you TAPS! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 22, 2007 at 1:56 PM
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Re: I liked the image of the Marina!
Thanks very much Troosha! It's a place I love to be at! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 22, 2007 at 1:55 PM
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Re: .Dave.--thanks for finding the time to pop in-I know you should have
been working? Thanks too-for your comment! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 22, 2007 at 1:54 PM
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Scramble
What opposites these two--an example of the dichotomy of life.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 22, 2007 at 10:55 AM
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I liked the image of the Marina!
posted by
Troosha
on August 22, 2007 at 8:58 AM
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Thought I'd just drop in before I do that other work I mentioned in the email. You're getting good at these, Chris. That first one reminds me of being in La Rochelle in western France.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on August 22, 2007 at 7:47 AM
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Re: Great work Chris, although the first one seems vaguely familiar........
hello mariaki--many thanks indeed! Perhaps the first one seems 'familiar' because I so often write from the same place? The Marina? Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 22, 2007 at 7:19 AM
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Re: It's all great work, Chris!
Thank you very much teddy! I appreciate your input! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 22, 2007 at 7:17 AM
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Re: Excellent! That second one was sad... but excellent
Thank you dark mistress! Yes-that second one was sad-wasn't it!
posted by
Scramble
on August 22, 2007 at 7:17 AM
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Re: Great couple of efforts Chris - as Mary says the last lines are great.
Thanks very much Tony! I would still prefere to write more 'Spiritual' haiku's but----it's not quite so easy! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 22, 2007 at 7:15 AM
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Re: Scramble - You're getting very good at these. My brain twists at the
Hi Mary-many thanks indeed! It seems much easier at the moment for me to write these haiku poems as opposed to 'ordinary' poems as I've always done in the past? God bless Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 22, 2007 at 7:14 AM
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Great work Chris, although the first one seems vaguely familiar........
posted by
mariaki
on August 22, 2007 at 6:03 AM
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It's all great work, Chris!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 22, 2007 at 1:37 AM
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Excellent! That second one was sad... but excellent
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 21, 2007 at 7:54 PM
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Great couple of efforts Chris - as Mary says the last lines are great.
posted by
Antonionioni
on August 21, 2007 at 2:31 PM
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Scramble - You're getting very good at these. My brain twists at the
last line every time, now. Well done.
posted by
FoliageGold
on August 21, 2007 at 1:52 PM
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