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that hits me especially hard.  It just made me try to picture what the policemen and firemen were feeling when they came upon my brother dead on his porch.  But I guess I just feel that at least they don't know that person personally like the family did.  It's like that but intensified. 

posted by serenity420 on August 19, 2007 at 10:35 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This hits hard ... I have no other words.
Chilitree...thanks, it was intended to hit hard, just like life does too often.

posted by food4thought on August 19, 2007 at 4:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Excellent work! Great pictures - though of course extremely sad.
Antonionioni...life is sad at times which makes us appreciate the times when it is happy.

posted by food4thought on August 19, 2007 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Food for thought
SB101, thank you for the compliment.

posted by food4thought on August 19, 2007 at 4:02 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thanks for sharing the feelings of professionals .
Afzal...maybe they are more professional than I imagine.

posted by food4thought on August 19, 2007 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: M...
I don't really know what inspired that poem, except it must be depressing to be there first hand when death visits.

posted by food4thought on August 19, 2007 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

This hits hard ... I have no other words.

posted by Chilitree on August 19, 2007 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent work! Great pictures - though of course extremely sad.

posted by Antonionioni on August 19, 2007 at 12:41 PM | link to this | reply

Food for thought
Thanks for the FOOD! Your writing reminds me of Harold Robbins!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on August 19, 2007 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for sharing the feelings of professionals .

posted by afzal50 on August 19, 2007 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

Well, that's certainly rather depressing!

It's very nicely done, though.

You know what I bet would be a pretty good job to have?
Running a nuclear reactor.
Because that way, even if a terrible accident occurs ...
you'll just end up with some sort of cool superpower.

posted by Mademoiselle on August 19, 2007 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply