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Great first draft!!!
Suspense is building. Nice weave between dreams and wakefulness, loved the bit about the doe's sudden fear. 

posted by Pat_B on August 24, 2007 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

you....freaking rock....
loved it!!!! check out some of my stories and tell me what you think of them!

posted by MorganJGavin on August 20, 2007 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

I'm gonna have to take some time to read this ... bedtime now...
just passed by to say welcome to blogit.

posted by Sheilah on August 18, 2007 at 9:50 PM | link to this | reply