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You have some good stuff. I like the representation of the mental struggle and tiredness you portray. Keep on writing. please check out some of mine.
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beltloop
on August 17, 2007 at 4:06 AM
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Pelagus
Last few lines.....still trying to evaluate it.
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on August 15, 2007 at 6:03 PM
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