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Soulofapoet
posted by
Soulofapoet
on December 4, 2007 at 9:52 AM
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straight forward, that's so cool
posted by
star4sky5
on September 4, 2007 at 8:55 AM
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A thought to your wish;
If one was to believe that God is the love and life in, through and around all living things (this is just an if), couldn't one see, hear, smell, taste and touch everything through God? Just a thought! ~Blessings~
posted by
roadscross
on August 31, 2007 at 1:33 PM
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I think this is a very nice poem....
posted by
Offy
on August 31, 2007 at 11:53 AM
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Well expressed and flowing
posted by
Katray2
on August 23, 2007 at 9:13 PM
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i wouldnt know how to critic poetry, but i can tell you i liked this poem
very much
posted by
jeansaw
on August 23, 2007 at 9:04 PM
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A few comments as per your request in The Blogit Town Square
1. Touching people seems not to fit with the other "so I could"s.
2. "not the coffee" need not be parenthetical. Indeed, placing them within parenthesis makes the phrase stand out more than it would if simply set off with commas.
3. The last lines are not convincing. Perhaps, if you brought in something along the lines of dreaming the dreams of all...
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on August 19, 2007 at 2:46 PM
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Ah yes...
To experience life as others might, what would be the one common experience?
posted by
food4thought
on August 15, 2007 at 8:19 PM
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Straightforward - This is lovely!
posted by
FoliageGold
on August 15, 2007 at 6:22 AM
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Nice work
I know the feeling, the desire to experience something the same way another does. Good poem on the topic
posted by
NightMajik
on August 13, 2007 at 7:29 AM
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All our tomorrows are ours to create.....
great piece, thank you
posted by
mariaki
on August 13, 2007 at 4:35 AM
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Cool.. a glimpse of heaven perhaps? ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on August 13, 2007 at 3:24 AM
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Hi - an admirable attempt to break through the barriers of just being us.
Imagine how it would feel, though, if for one day we were able to experience how someone else thinks and feels, but still be us. We would probably hate it at first!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on August 12, 2007 at 2:37 AM
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We have to live to see a better tomorrow .
posted by
afzal50
on August 11, 2007 at 5:51 PM
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Love this poem
posted by
Sheilah
on August 11, 2007 at 10:56 AM
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