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JMO - Oh my gosh! This is so beautiful! And I LOVE Pablo Neruda.
He was an inspiration to one of the writings of my books.........
posted by
FoliageGold
on August 8, 2007 at 5:11 PM
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Very nice in English too.
posted by
Antonionioni
on August 8, 2007 at 11:46 AM
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Thanks Dave!
posted by
JMO_
on August 8, 2007 at 11:22 AM
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Beautiful. Very nice use of the second person to draw in the reader and some unique turns of phrase.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on August 8, 2007 at 11:16 AM
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Excellent expression . WEll said !
posted by
afzal50
on August 8, 2007 at 11:14 AM
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