Comments on Chapter 1: The Final Child

Go to FlamebornAdd a commentGo to Chapter 1: The Final Child

Re: An ominous read...good first chapter!
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback!

posted by Lady_Rane on August 8, 2007 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

Intriguing story, Lady Rane. Write on...

posted by saul_relative on August 8, 2007 at 10:25 AM | link to this | reply

An ominous read...good first chapter!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 7, 2007 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply