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Re:Chili-Wow--many thanks for the stars! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 7, 2007 at 9:12 AM
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Re: .Dave. Thank you so much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 7, 2007 at 9:11 AM
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Re: Excellent Haiku... thank you!!!!
Thank you very much Shams!I'm pleased you like it and-you're welcome!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 7, 2007 at 9:10 AM
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Re: I think "cut and paste" is in order!
Thank you so much mariaki! I don't understand why you say 'cut and paste' is in order? Can you please explain? God bless-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 7, 2007 at 9:08 AM
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Re: Scramble - You're really having fun with these aren't you? Fortunate
Mary-many thanks indeed! Yes-Durbin has taught me so much-'tho I still have loads more to learn! Sometimes I get 'light headed with it'-at those times-I won't call Durbin my 'coach'-in case the association embarrasses him!(Ha Ha) God bless-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 7, 2007 at 9:07 AM
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Re: Great.3d needs ACCLAIMS, i think, two C's? Also haiku avoid alliteration
Hello my friend-Durbin-thank you for pointing out my spelling mistake!I have just looked up the word 'alliteration' in the dictionary because I've never heard of it-I appreciate the trouble you go to-on behalf of my working with haiku!Yes-'tho sometimes I am 'light hearted' and flippant-I am serious about haiku and I DO speak about you as my sidelines coach-in fact I'm proud to! So again-many thanks 'coach'! God bless-shalommyfriendfromchris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 7, 2007 at 9:04 AM
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posted by
Chilitree
on August 7, 2007 at 9:02 AM
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Re: Wow...I like these ones
Thank you so much-angel! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 7, 2007 at 8:58 AM
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Very natural ones this time.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on August 7, 2007 at 7:02 AM
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Excellent Haiku... thank you!!!!
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on August 7, 2007 at 1:42 AM
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I think "cut and paste" is in order!
excellent pieces once again my friend - God bless
posted by
mariaki
on August 7, 2007 at 1:33 AM
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Scramble - You're really having fun with these aren't you? Fortunate
Durbin knows haiku and can 'coach' from what he knows to share. Well done!
posted by
FoliageGold
on August 6, 2007 at 6:56 PM
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Great.3d needs ACCLAIMS, i think, two C's? Also haiku avoid alliteration
...some of mine happen on their own, but we nedd to go back and remove alliteration (only if u r getting serious and if I am ever mentioned as your sidelines coach, LOL)
http://www.barkclothhawaii.com/thumbnails/natural/t30puaki.jpg
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 6, 2007 at 4:45 PM
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Wow...I like these ones
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 6, 2007 at 4:34 PM
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Re: Hi Chris...fantastic writing!
Wow--thank you so much Teddy! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 6, 2007 at 1:41 PM
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Hi Chris...fantastic writing!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 6, 2007 at 1:16 PM
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Re: MadamShyness-thank you very much.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 6, 2007 at 1:12 PM
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Re: Lovely nature-based observations, Chris!
Thank you so much Tony! I'm pleased you like them.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 6, 2007 at 1:12 PM
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posted by
_Symphony_
on August 6, 2007 at 11:55 AM
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Lovely nature-based observations, Chris!
posted by
Antonionioni
on August 6, 2007 at 11:25 AM
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