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Thank you all for the comments
weekends are busy for me-Twomany-the best stuff seems to come on the fly and the things I might see as lame others find devine. Go figure. Rabbit out of the hat
posted by
spanish_dragon
on August 5, 2007 at 7:57 AM
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well done
that is a very very very nice piece. And you said you cant write poetry very well.Who you trying to fool young lady....
posted by
twomany
on August 5, 2007 at 3:01 AM
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Such a beautifully sensual poem
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 4, 2007 at 9:19 PM
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Beautiful, natural poem...
posted by
Enigmatic68
on August 4, 2007 at 4:51 PM
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Sweet Poem...
U wrote it beautifully.
posted by
danieljulie
on August 4, 2007 at 4:27 PM
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Re: Spanish - How nice! The repetition really 'marries' it together.
I agree with FoliageGold.
posted by
afzal50
on August 3, 2007 at 11:08 PM
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very nice
posted by
star4sky5
on August 3, 2007 at 9:12 PM
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Spanish - How nice! The repetition really 'marries' it together.
posted by
FoliageGold
on August 3, 2007 at 8:00 PM
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