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innocense, alasa i remember
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on February 23, 2008 at 2:33 PM
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This is so well written...
I love the constant questions and wonderings and fearful 'what ifs' throughout the poem and then the last line, which seems so suddenly soothing and healing... I don't know if it's meant to be read like that, but it feels like a blessed calm after a storm.
posted by
opheliablue
on September 7, 2007 at 4:37 PM
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Superbly so...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 17, 2007 at 4:37 PM
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Wonderfully written...I enjoyed this
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on August 4, 2007 at 5:19 PM
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beautifully depressing
posted by
pelagus
on August 1, 2007 at 1:57 AM
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posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on July 31, 2007 at 7:42 AM
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