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Captured the essence of walking away very nicely. Walking away still
can hurt - strange us humans, aren't we! Great post Angel.
posted by
SpencerStreetStation
on July 30, 2007 at 1:15 AM
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nice, i liked the ..
picture you painted here. very good way with words, es muy nice!
posted by
twomany
on July 27, 2007 at 5:39 AM
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There is never an easy way for men&women to build relationships--either
paternalistic, matriarchal, chavinistic, sado-masochistic, exploitative... only in one way was the past a little better, with ACCEPTED roles, despite the rare Pocohontas, Sacagawea, Abigail Adams, Susan B. Anthony, Sojourner Truth, Frederick Douglass, Linda Brent Jacobs ... even a Queen Elizabeth or the Spanish Isabella. shalom and healing...with prayer. ASK JESUS to take your pain away. I have no scientific explanation but if u ask, HE WILL. shalom
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 26, 2007 at 4:19 PM
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Great expression of emotion through these lines - excellent.
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 26, 2007 at 10:44 AM
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Raw emotion powerfully expressed
brave ending too.....
posted by
mariaki
on July 26, 2007 at 3:11 AM
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wEll expressed ! Good Poem!
posted by
afzal50
on July 25, 2007 at 9:27 PM
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Wow
You must have been really close to that person to feel that way-good for you to walk away-no ryhme intended. Moving nicely put.
posted by
spanish_dragon
on July 25, 2007 at 6:58 PM
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