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The_Poets_Dreams
That is upsetting for you, better things are ahead I am sure my friend................
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 28, 2007 at 4:20 PM
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posted by
Amanda__
on July 27, 2007 at 8:24 AM
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Nice Poem
very nice poem, but also very tragic. if it's based on a true event, sorry about what happened. But look at the bright side, tragedy leads to creativity and then to fame. Hopefully that makes you feel better.
posted by
Kei87
on July 26, 2007 at 7:46 PM
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The_Poets_Dreams
Your poem is well written, but sad.
I wish for you many blessings.
posted by
jacentaOld
on July 26, 2007 at 3:02 PM
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Better you find out now than get all involved and married and such, only
to find out later....
posted by
WindTapper
on July 26, 2007 at 3:02 PM
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Trust
That must be one of the hardest things in life, not to be able to trust those closest to you.....
posted by
knitwoman1958
on July 26, 2007 at 1:43 PM
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things happen for a reason, something real nice must be awaiting for you...
great things will cherish your life with love, luck, happiness and pure joy of peace......
I will pray for you...
Sue
posted by
star4sky5
on July 25, 2007 at 9:26 PM
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Would you like me to WAK 'em?
posted by
justanotherskinnybitch
on July 25, 2007 at 2:54 PM
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Good honest writing - well done.
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 25, 2007 at 11:30 AM
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The_Poet - I hope this is a fictional poem. Family unfortunately are so
very close and know exactly where to place the knife if they so choose. Well done!
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 25, 2007 at 7:24 AM
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Although the betrayal hurts deeply....
don't let it scar you....they will have to live with themselves, you will heal....and be wiser. Sometimes we hold ones we love to the same standard as we hold ourselves....but then we find their standard isn't as high or noble as ours. Keep open your heart...and one day your cousin may....aspire to your standard and ask forgivness. Smile it's contagious....
posted by
Irish3
on July 25, 2007 at 5:49 AM
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So sorry--the song has it wrong, so here goes "Every cut is till deeper"
I wish you healing...NEVER NEVER EVER give in to cynicism. If humans get to you, look at the sky (up) or the flowers (Down) ...you remain a poet and a poets dream. shalom/peace
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 25, 2007 at 4:21 AM
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It might help to know
what goes around comes around - if this poem is true for you try not to lose your trust in everybody for the sake of 2 selfish people
posted by
mariaki
on July 25, 2007 at 4:04 AM
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