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Re: Scramble
Troosha-many thanks indeed! You have just taught me another special-ie:'Bringing Nature To Life'! Thank you for that-I hadn't realised that was a key to haiku.God bless Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 25, 2007 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris - These are highly visual. Well done.
Thank you so much Mary! I really am enjoying this new way of writing. Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 25, 2007 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

Scramble
Loved the butterfly one... good imagery.  Bringing nature to life (from my understanding) is key to Haiku. 

posted by Troosha on July 25, 2007 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Chris - These are highly visual. Well done.

posted by FoliageGold on July 25, 2007 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: "God" morning my dear friend Chris. Shalom-Salaam--shanthi Aum--Amen!
Good afternoon my friend Neil! Thank you for the beautiful picture! Shalomfromchris.

posted by Scramble on July 25, 2007 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

Re: You've obviously found your second calling Chris!
mariaki-thank you so much! It's the first time I've tried writing in a different style and I quite like it-(going to try something else in a little while)It feels GOOD to have a CHOICE!Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 25, 2007 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris, you show-off! These are beautiful!
Many thanks Teddy! Yes-I do feel I am 'showing off'a wee bit! Ha Ha.So much FUN-without the personalisation.Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 25, 2007 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Bless you NAJWA! I am enjoying the peacefulness of this kind of
writing! Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 25, 2007 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: The second one is really good--reminds me of Basho, one of the Japanese
Hi Durbin-many thanks indeed! Yes-I actually saw-at a sideways glance-what I thought was a red butterfly!(We have various b/flies coming to the Budlea bush)I went to see it-because it was unusually bright-BUT-it was a petal from the red climbing rose! Shalommyfriendfromchris.

posted by Scramble on July 25, 2007 at 7:15 AM | link to this | reply

"God" morning my dear friend Chris. Shalom-Salaam--shanthi Aum--Amen!

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 25, 2007 at 4:03 AM | link to this | reply

You've obviously found your second calling Chris!
impressive, well done

posted by mariaki on July 25, 2007 at 3:48 AM | link to this | reply

Chris, you show-off! These are beautiful!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on July 25, 2007 at 3:23 AM | link to this | reply

THIS IS THE MUSIC OF THE SOUL..............the stranger

posted by NAJWA on July 24, 2007 at 2:14 PM | link to this | reply

The second one is really good--reminds me of Basho, one of the Japanese
hajin, or haiku masters. Good going Chris, shalom

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 24, 2007 at 1:00 PM | link to this | reply