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wow...that was excellent!
I read through some of your other stuff. This is definitely one of the best...cheers!
posted by
dark_mistress_again
on July 24, 2007 at 4:04 PM
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wonderful!!!!
that was very interesting and captured the feeling of being in a dream and knowing you're in a dream. and then waking up all disoriented. :-D have a good day.
posted by
serenity420
on July 24, 2007 at 10:37 AM
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Lovely poem !
posted by
afzal50
on July 24, 2007 at 8:09 AM
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Good read, Pat - it certainly feels like being in a dream.
You know how the cliche of dreams is that everything is surreal- I don't find that usually - it's fairly realistic - but unexpected things sometimes happen. The other night (in my dream) I was sitting next to Tony Blair at an evening meal at a long table. He was very quick to get angry but also did his best to smooth over the situation with a light-hearted remark. It's funny, I feel I know him now!
posted by
Antonionioni
on July 24, 2007 at 7:42 AM
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