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Re: i liked all your haiku poems, none i found ugly
Hello callista--I have just found your response--thank you so very much!(just in case you return)Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 1, 2007 at 2:05 PM
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i liked all your haiku poems, none i found ugly
posted by
jeansaw
on July 31, 2007 at 6:49 PM
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Re: Well done Chris
mariaki--thank you so much! God bless-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 24, 2007 at 9:58 AM
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Re: eyes open again
You are so right twomany! Now that I've cleared away so much rubbish-I can see so much Beauty! Thank you.Chris.
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Scramble
on July 24, 2007 at 9:57 AM
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Re: Great work indeed!
Teddy-I'm gob-smacked! Thank you very much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 24, 2007 at 9:56 AM
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Re: I like both of these poems. . .
stbond--thank you for your lovely remark! I was afraid that nature lovers might not like that! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 24, 2007 at 9:55 AM
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Re: scramble
Hi Lustorlove---Thanks for looking in! I will send you an email-and try to make these 'syllables' a little easier to follow-but I won't be able to do that-until after I have fed my family-(sometime tonight)I've had Electricians in all day----God bless Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 24, 2007 at 9:53 AM
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Re: MadamShyness-thank you so much for the amazing 'pretties'.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 24, 2007 at 9:51 AM
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Re: Ota said it best--Never again ought U say, this is not good.Self-esteem is
Hi Neil-I am absolutely staggered at everyones remarks-(including your own of course) I am so enjoying haiku!But look at the EXREMELY GOOD TEACHERS I have on this site! Wonderful! shalomfromchrisscramble.
posted by
Scramble
on July 24, 2007 at 9:50 AM
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Re: Thank you so much-OTA.Peace be with you too.Chris
posted by
Scramble
on July 24, 2007 at 9:47 AM
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Well done Chris
both worthy of a double read
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mariaki
on July 24, 2007 at 2:06 AM
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eyes open again
it is amazing what you dont see when going the through the things that affect us.It is good to see the little things isnt it.
posted by
twomany
on July 23, 2007 at 11:53 PM
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Great work indeed!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 23, 2007 at 11:08 PM
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I like both of these poems. . .
about delicate things. And, oh, how much joy a moth brings to a cat--nature's plaything!
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stbond
on July 23, 2007 at 10:49 PM
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scramble
I am still trying to figure this out, its the syallables that get me, its been too long since I was in school, can you teach an old dog new tricks
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Lanetay
on July 23, 2007 at 9:42 PM
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posted by
_Symphony_
on July 23, 2007 at 3:48 PM
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Ota said it best--Never again ought U say, this is not good.Self-esteem is
not a bad thing, especially when U have earned it. You remind me of students and people (in general) back home, who are eager to learn. Here, --and I generalize-- people will not want to learn from you unless you are a celebrity or very rich (materially, that is) Good going--shalomfromneilDurbin
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 23, 2007 at 3:31 PM
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they are both charming. ..~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 23, 2007 at 2:11 PM
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