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Re: Re: Re: scramble
thank you Chris
posted by
Lanetay
on July 22, 2007 at 2:21 PM
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Re: Re: scramble
WOW Lustorlove--That's Brilliant! That would change the colour of anyones tears! Beautifull-thanks. Chris.
that's the best I can do until I learn 'how'!
posted by
Scramble
on July 22, 2007 at 1:23 PM
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Re: scramble
Lustorlove--look up haiku on the net if you would like toknow more-(I'm only a beginner)-or-look back here at Durbins comment! I'll send you what I have been sent-I'll email it for you.Bye for now-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 22, 2007 at 1:21 PM
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here is the sparkling rose but what a different color it is
posted by
Lanetay
on July 22, 2007 at 9:03 AM
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scramble
I still havent figured this haiku out, maybe I need to look it up in the dictionary?
posted by
Lanetay
on July 22, 2007 at 9:02 AM
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Yes my friend--like everyone else, we cope. At the end of the day, I sleep
knowing I am being the best human being I can be, with the least theft, hurt and pollution of the planet I can get by with. Now off to Church---shalomDearChris
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 22, 2007 at 6:25 AM
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Re: Almost perfect Chris, --so you are wondering why the almost?
Hello Durbin--many thanks for looking in AND for 'correcting'! You are so right-as ever-(mostly) I have written 6 syllables-my mistake-(can't count-although was so carefull)! Thanks for that.Hope you're enjoying w/e? Shalom from Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 22, 2007 at 5:46 AM
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Re: Chris, I am going to have to try more haiku myself...well done...
Thank you so much Rumored! I think it's pretty hard work-but I will still try some more!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 22, 2007 at 5:38 AM
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Almost perfect Chris, --so you are wondering why the almost?
The first line jas 6 syllables, easily fixed--unless you think I am changing your meaning - by reqwriting Line 1 "Abundant roses." I love the twist you got in the third line. Purrrfect! almost --shalomfromneil
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 21, 2007 at 1:53 PM
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Chris, I am going to have to try more haiku myself...well done...
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posted by
Rumor
on July 21, 2007 at 1:42 PM
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Re: It's simply wonderful .
afzal-what a lovely response-Thank you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2007 at 7:14 AM
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Re: Good job!
Thank you so much Ariala! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2007 at 7:13 AM
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Re: NAJWA-thank you so much my friend! Somehow I thought you might
like this one.From your friend-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 21, 2007 at 7:12 AM
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It's simply wonderful .
posted by
afzal50
on July 21, 2007 at 6:04 AM
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Good job!
posted by
Ariala
on July 21, 2007 at 5:59 AM
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RED TEARS,,,,,
,,,,this is got me........Sparkling Roses from heavy showers,,,,,,,,,,,it is very beautiful...
........ your friend,,,,,the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on July 21, 2007 at 5:58 AM
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