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Hey
I just wanted to thank you for reading my poetry, I'm new here, Just getting started. and to tell you that you are an awesome writer. Take care.
posted by
23013
on August 24, 2007 at 9:59 AM
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i agree with all, excellent , creative and fun
posted by
jeansaw
on August 23, 2007 at 9:08 PM
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Nice.
posted by
spanish_dragon
on August 6, 2007 at 2:17 PM
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Different and creative poetry - I enjoyed it. Hope you will be posting more
posted by
Katray2
on July 29, 2007 at 3:02 PM
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and play... word games (what else!)
Do u have time to play the SPELLRIDER vocab building game on my leading post for DURBIN? I saw your "admiration" and tarried a bit more (Blogit will be the ruin of me, Mark me words, Lassie!) god night---namaskaram Ji
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 27, 2007 at 7:49 PM
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come back soon
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 26, 2007 at 4:21 PM
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sup
that was very interesting. I was intrigued by the word-play. thanx 4 the comments. It is actually about my brother passing away. he killed himself in december and I still can't quite comprehend because you never even knew he thought of it. there was no note, so i don't know why and i feel so guilty. so i try to write about it in an attempt to relieve myself of these awful feelings. sometimes it works. sometimes i just feel worse seeing it written out before me. i know this was long. i'm kind of talkative tonight and have no one to talk to. thanx 4 reading. :-D
posted by
serenity420
on July 25, 2007 at 8:45 PM
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How very unusual. The rhythm of the piece grabs you and the word-play shakes you up.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on July 23, 2007 at 9:22 AM
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Excellent
well done
posted by
mariaki
on July 23, 2007 at 3:33 AM
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It reads like an anthem. Rock on, Straightforward...
posted by
saul_relative
on July 22, 2007 at 4:21 PM
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very nice
posted by
star4sky5
on July 21, 2007 at 6:04 PM
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very nice
posted by
star4sky5
on July 21, 2007 at 6:04 PM
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Powerful. Original. Pondersome!
Durbinforpeace
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 21, 2007 at 9:17 AM
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I love it...
posted by
nemonemo
on July 20, 2007 at 10:54 PM
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posted by
spanish_dragon
on July 20, 2007 at 7:48 PM
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