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The Fallacy
These six lines have a world of meaning, and how we humans long for love; dream of love; and accept so much less in our desperation not to be alone. Beautiful . . . almost a classic sonnet.
joab
The dream caught in my mind,
The idea of loving blindly.
Now only gleams of travesty.
As I’ve felt your hunger, your fire.
Ached in pain, passion, desire.
I’ve felt your touch, but not your love.
posted by
joab1
on July 20, 2007 at 8:43 AM
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Re: LP, absolutely wonderful piece!
Teddy
Thanks for your compliment!
Cheers
posted by
La_Paloma
on July 18, 2007 at 2:06 AM
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LP, absolutely wonderful piece!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 18, 2007 at 12:13 AM
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Re: la poloma
lustorlove
you're right. sometimes, when you give your love, it's just doesn't come back. and i can't expect anything in return...because i'll get disappointment. never expect.
Thanks!
Cheers
posted by
La_Paloma
on July 17, 2007 at 6:07 PM
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Re: La Paloma, how many understand this?
Bhaskar.ing
I'm so glad that finally somebody is able to tell me about the what the real love is. I'm really glad that actually there's somebody who understands. I'm so alone!
Thanks!!!
Cheers
posted by
La_Paloma
on July 17, 2007 at 6:05 PM
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la poloma
where there is hope and love to give there is love in return, talk to me with the record on how many times a heart can break and come back fighting
posted by
Lanetay
on July 17, 2007 at 12:03 PM
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La Paloma, how many understand this?
Love exists for love's sake and nothing else. It is spontaneous and spreads delight. Everything is permeated by love. Love can conquer anything. Selfless, pure, unalloyed love leads man to God. Selfish and constricted love binds man to the world. Unable to comprehend the pure and sacred nature of love, man today is a prey to endless worries because of his attachment to worldly objects. Man's primary duty is to understand the truth about the Love principle. Once he understands the nature of love, he will not go astray.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 17, 2007 at 10:01 AM
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La_Paloma - Love is the absence of expectations. Very well done.
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 17, 2007 at 9:43 AM
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Re: Very poignant and hard hitting . WEll said !
Afzal
Thanks!
Cheers
posted by
La_Paloma
on July 17, 2007 at 7:45 AM
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Re: Well said!
Sunnybeach7
Thanks!
Cheers
posted by
La_Paloma
on July 17, 2007 at 7:45 AM
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Re: Tres bon.
Dave
Thanks!
Cheers
posted by
La_Paloma
on July 17, 2007 at 7:45 AM
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Well said!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on July 17, 2007 at 7:24 AM
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Very poignant and hard hitting . WEll said !
posted by
afzal50
on July 17, 2007 at 5:56 AM
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Tres bon.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on July 17, 2007 at 1:18 AM
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