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rainydayinmay - Just realized I read this out of sequence somehow.
This was a very poignant read and you wrote it very well. There's touches of genuine love in here between two very young people. Fear in many ways seems to have prevailed and I still wonder just what was it made him act so irresponsibly? As a girl, I was right there with you through all of this as I've had those mixed up emotions as well, still do at times. I wonder if we ever really learn to deal with this sort of thing. Part of me doesn't think so because the original wound is always there. Oh, I've heard it said that over time these things fade, yes they do in some ways but they colour all other future upsets. More please.
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 3, 2007 at 2:34 AM
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rainydayinmay - Girlfriend? Gosh, indeed.
posted by
FoliageGold
on July 3, 2007 at 2:16 AM
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Wow! Great story!
Smiles
and roses
from Bo ^..^ the wonder dog & me too!
posted by
Whacky
on July 2, 2007 at 11:10 PM
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thank you Hazel!
posted by
rainydayinmay
on July 2, 2007 at 9:23 PM
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Proc, you are truly too sweet!
posted by
rainydayinmay
on July 2, 2007 at 9:22 PM
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such a captivating story !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on July 2, 2007 at 6:55 PM
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Ive caught up and left comments. All I can say is amazing!!!!!
posted by
proc
on July 2, 2007 at 3:34 PM
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I have to go back to pick up the whole story but even coming in
the middle like this I sense a fantastic story ,wellwritten and honest.
posted by
proc
on July 2, 2007 at 3:21 PM
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