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Re: Not so scary in bed. lol.

posted by scriber on June 28, 2007 at 4:30 PM | link to this | reply

Scary to talk to suspects?

posted by A-and-B on June 28, 2007 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Irish3--thanks so much.

posted by scriber on June 28, 2007 at 2:55 PM | link to this | reply

Re: expressed very well--thanks MadamS--

posted by scriber on June 28, 2007 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: drohan254--thank you. Very kind.

posted by scriber on June 28, 2007 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: NAJWA--thanks, you are always very kind.

posted by scriber on June 28, 2007 at 2:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: scriber - Oh my........was a dream, fantasy, nightmare or a drunken stupor?
--FG--this is adapted from an incident in Tropic of Detroit.  He is sure she killed out of jealously.  Her mind is fast deteriorating and she now is not sure if she did, or maybe he did. 

posted by scriber on June 28, 2007 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

Scriber, you always lead...
us in giving a morsel, then......abruptly leave us to our imagining. I love it though, you brilliantly bring us along subtly and then........ more to come. You are so clever, you make us want to read more and I love your descriptions so real.

posted by Irish3 on June 28, 2007 at 2:27 PM | link to this | reply

expressed very well

posted by _Symphony_ on June 28, 2007 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL SCRIBER

posted by drohan254 on June 28, 2007 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

I could not stop reading for that it is so sad but it could be true
Some time love turn to be selfishness and controling but I am sure it is very wrong but we experincesed it in the true life???
Unique Poem with strong massege to the hearts.........             the stranger

posted by NAJWA on June 28, 2007 at 10:14 AM | link to this | reply

scriber - Oh my........was a dream, fantasy, nightmare or a drunken stupor?
There doesn't seem to be recall of the 'event', only physical memory of sorts.  You've got me on this one.

posted by FoliageGold on June 28, 2007 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply