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posted by
riri0322
on June 19, 2007 at 8:28 AM
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Comments outwiegh the poem.Interesting.Child bigger than the father.
posted by
circuit
on June 19, 2007 at 6:34 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: You are cheating....
A bit of seriousness....word game over....I can't stay up too much longer....it is 2:30AM here, and I get up at 5:00. I can stay a bit longer but Q and A maybe.
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 11:33 PM
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Re: Re: Re: You are cheating....
i love also
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 11:26 PM
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Re: Re: You are cheating....
Now I'm cheating....never,should,you,care, we, know,I, have,much, to,give,and,I, will, give, it, to, you...we can play...all night it's all the same...it's crazy it's insane....and I love it.
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 11:25 PM
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Re: You are cheating....
i ,could, i dont mine, i think you dont, either, i am mine you are mine. when is now i love me and the other that hears me which is who i love who
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 11:21 PM
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You are cheating....
what are you doing you gotta use ming silly. Okay here goes....
Pretend,I,am, mystery,you, must , solve, me, am, I, dead, or, alive, shall, I, crawl, or, fly, lightning, stikes, thunder, rolls, win, my. heart,captivate, my, soul........
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 11:16 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Davi7 Word tag....your turn.
yes
i
am
forever
come
with
me
you
have
you
are
secure
he
went
all
the
way
me
don't
be
no
more
it
is
done
look
now
see
when
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 11:12 PM
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Re: Re: Davi7 Word tag....your turn.
forgot-me, when-never, forget- to remember, Never- lasting, stay- with me, look-seek,me -and you, lips -caress, loving-kiss, nothing-eludes- to- us, taste- sweet, me-love, who-YOU
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 11:03 PM
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Re: Davi7 Word tag....your turn.
forgot
when
forget
never
stay
look
me
lips
kiss
nothing
to
taste
me
who
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 10:55 PM
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Davi7 Word tag....your turn.
fire....ice....tears....eternal....happy play if you are here you know the rules....
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 10:50 PM
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Re: : Re: Re: Re: Re: Davi 7 a bit brief... Go to your #6 okay I'm there
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 9:19 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Davi 7 a bit brief....
come on cut me some slack pretty lady and what are you doing in my thoughts who gave you that authority to ENTER IN
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 9:13 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Davi 7 a bit brief....
Going to a less crowed space to comment. what tone?
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 9:11 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Davi 7 a bit brief....
calm down lady lets talk and watch how you talk to me i dont like that tone hahaha you are forever me
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 9:09 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Davi 7 a bit brief....
Yeah It's been crazy with me, and well emotions everywhere, thank you for the poem I love it, how's the movie and do you work or can you chat a bit no biggy if you can't.
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 9:06 PM
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Re: Re: Davi 7 a bit brief....
thanks for reading it you sound tired
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 9:03 PM
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Re: Davi 7 a bit brief....
I don't know i just wrote it
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 9:01 PM
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Davi 7 a bit brief....
but beautiful....you playing the word game? I, think, you, are, totally, great, love.
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 8:15 PM
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