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Davi.... read these comments.
you have a fan club....if you ever doubted yourself as a writer....wow...you don't need me or anything I have to offer you. I'll bring you down....
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 12:11 PM
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Davi
"She can now rest" - possibly the best gift a man can give a woman. We look for the peacefulness of a man's arms... Very soulful poem.
posted by
Troosha
on June 18, 2007 at 10:31 AM
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posted by
rainydayinmay
on June 18, 2007 at 5:27 AM
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BEAUTIFUL POEM......
posted by
star4sky5
on June 18, 2007 at 3:21 AM
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Re: Re: Davi7 Hey you....Finally you sleep.
left current message, this morning at when she writes she writes alone....find it?
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 3:12 AM
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Re: Davi7 Hey you....Finally you sleep.
I reread this giving it the time it deserves as all of your posts seem to warrant. What can I say you speak a truth I know...but you know that. Take me away, I like that....my soul needs freed and I think you just might be able to do it. Don't stop being honest with me, I think that's where the oneness comes. You provoke me...as you see with my last post. Others would say inspire and tomorrow I will too, but tonight you provoked....good night.
posted by
Irish3
on June 17, 2007 at 9:17 PM
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posted by
riri0322
on June 17, 2007 at 8:53 PM
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Davi7 Hey you....
What are you doing? I thought you needed to lay down....thank you I know the words are to console....and they do....and I will read them again and write....read my thoughts tomorrow. Because if you stay much longer I'll worry all night.
posted by
Irish3
on June 17, 2007 at 8:43 PM
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