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Re: Re: Re: Re: Davi7 back to the post...
Didn't see that but I do now thank you....I love it by the way!
posted by
Irish3
on June 18, 2007 at 10:51 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Davi7 back to the post...
making view everything with an emotional oneness
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 10:46 AM
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Re: Re: Davi7 back to the post...
my emotions is making few everything with a oneness that has deep feeelings about the way I feel my thoughts.
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 10:45 AM
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Re: Davi7 back to the post...
So long lives the parade with just one face. Next time you see a band marching stare deep inside there mind as they all have a look on there face as they are one with the music.They become to began I am writing about what is on there minds.
posted by
davi7
on June 18, 2007 at 10:38 AM
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Davi7 back to the post...
I'm not real clear of the ending....it's sad if I'm reading it right. The parade of one face, eveyone reminds you of someone special, but you are going through the motions only, why because she's unattainable? Hummmm or am I way off base?
posted by
Irish3
on June 17, 2007 at 9:34 PM
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I do....you need to take care of you for your family Samson and for you. My work is seconday and I'm okay....so you will be on tomorrow after a ton of sleep right?
posted by
Irish3
on June 17, 2007 at 8:13 PM
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a little as long as i am talking to you and you are ok dont worry about me ok
posted by
davi7
on June 17, 2007 at 8:11 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Davi 7 Hello....I understand,
Did you sleep?
posted by
Irish3
on June 17, 2007 at 8:09 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Davi 7 Hello....I understand,
so strict with davie 7 i know you care about me thank you only 8 tonight
posted by
davi7
on June 17, 2007 at 8:08 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Davi 7 Hello....I understand,
Later for that really....have you slept at all today and how long do you work tonight?
posted by
Irish3
on June 17, 2007 at 7:57 PM
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Re: Re: Davi 7 Hello....I understand,
I am here for a little while right now and forget what i said yesterday you wanted one opinion not the opinion that determines if you are a writer or not like i said you have to contact the people for the type of stuff you write they are out there i just don't know where.
posted by
davi7
on June 17, 2007 at 7:54 PM
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posted by
circuit
on June 17, 2007 at 7:53 PM
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Re: Davi 7 Hello....I understand,
You have to work too much....do you ever get a day off? Don't worry about me...I was just trying to impove myself and wanted your opinion...it means so much......okay maybe I just miss talking to you....it's something I look forward to. Be careful at work, and get your sleep. I'll be here when you are....
posted by
Irish3
on June 17, 2007 at 7:50 PM
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Hey, Irish3. I have been tired.But I am here for the moment. I don't know when I am going to see you again because I have to work tonight.Tomorrow won't be sad bad. You will hear from me.but its hard sometimes because my wife likes to hog the computer. She loves to play solitaire.
posted by
davi7
on June 17, 2007 at 7:39 PM
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