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Very well done. A nice panorama of the season.
Be well,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on May 3, 2007 at 8:08 PM
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Re: Food
Kat02...I wrote this right after I waked home in the rain, so it sort of wrote itself during that 8 minutes in the weather, it wasn't made up, it was for the most part, real. I would have made it all rhyme, if I only had the time, as it was I punched a mime!
posted by
food4thought
on May 3, 2007 at 8:07 PM
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Re: Nice poem. WEll expressed .
Afzal, thank you.
posted by
food4thought
on May 3, 2007 at 8:04 PM
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Re: May has always been my least favorite month ...
Mademoiselle...You know, that rhyme was unitentional, but I left it in anyway, what's one rhyme going to hurt?
posted by
food4thought
on May 3, 2007 at 8:04 PM
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Re: Food4thought
Kabu, thank you.
posted by
food4thought
on May 3, 2007 at 8:03 PM
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Food
This poem was very well expressed and you could almost feel the stinging rain , and as far as rhyming goes poetry does not have to rhyme, Anyone who writes poetry knows this
posted by
Kat02
on May 3, 2007 at 2:57 AM
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Nice poem. WEll expressed .
posted by
afzal50
on May 3, 2007 at 12:38 AM
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lovely poem
posted by
netty21
on May 2, 2007 at 11:18 PM
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May has always been my least favorite month ...
Partly due to it being the unofficial start of pollen season. But mostly because of Mother's Day.
P.S. I only read one rhyme, though.
If I was in a lynch mob, I think I'd try to stay near the back.
That way, if somebody shamed us into disbanding,
I could sort of slip off to the side and just
pretend I was window-shopping or something.
posted by
Mademoiselle
on May 2, 2007 at 10:45 PM
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Food4thought
a jewel of a poem
posted by
Kabu
on May 2, 2007 at 10:30 PM
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