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Don't leave yr last popst as "heartbroken." Hope U will write anything soon

Te;ll me about the flowers that are in bloom in oyur yard/garden or along the way to the supermarket, Chris. muchloveand peace. shalomfromneil

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on May 10, 2007 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Chilitree--thank you so much for popping in and leaving me

so many flowers! Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 10, 2007 at 3:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: You haven't posted in a while!

Ariala-many thanks for dropping in-no I think I have been pre-occupied-creating writer's block!However-I thoroughly enjoy 'reading everyone'!Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 10, 2007 at 3:31 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Chilitree on May 10, 2007 at 12:28 AM | link to this | reply

You haven't posted in a while!

posted by Ariala on May 9, 2007 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Embracing

Neil-Hi.I've just got back from w/e away and found TWO of the most beautifull and welcoming pictures from you!!! Thank you so much.shalomfromchris.

posted by Scramble on May 8, 2007 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris, very powerful and very beautiful as well...

Hello RI. I've been away for w/e and just found your comment! Amazing-thank you so much!

posted by Scramble on May 8, 2007 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

Chris, very powerful and very beautiful as well...

you are indeed a very strong woman....

posted by Rumor on May 7, 2007 at 2:39 PM | link to this | reply

You have recived it...before and many times...to come. shalom Dear Friend

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on May 4, 2007 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply

Embracing

http://tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:hgSdeqZGaY_XtM:http://www.mamarocks.com/Jesus1Icon2.jpg

 

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on May 4, 2007 at 2:27 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nice

NightMagic--thank you so much for your response-I'm glad you like it.Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 4, 2007 at 6:37 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I bring health celebration & sonnet-warnings for the unschooled about STDs

Neil--brilliant thank you! I recall reading this one on your site but I'm sure that I mis-interpretted it!!!Sorry and thank you for re-posting here! shalomfromchris.

posted by Scramble on May 4, 2007 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I'm glad your heart is done bleeding. .

stbond--thank you so much! I do hope you will be able to remove the bandaid soon and allow your heart to breathe in fresh air.Bye for now-Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 4, 2007 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Nice

Very good portrayal of a broken and then healed heart.

posted by NightMajik on May 4, 2007 at 5:50 AM | link to this | reply

I bring health celebration & sonnet-warnings for the unschooled about STDs

SKIN DEEP DANGERS? (Sonnet may have been inspired by Bard Tonyzonit)

SKIN DEEP DANGERS?

 

How does Creation speak through our bodies?

These wonders silence doubters and science

These immaculate wombs for pure babies …

Or ticking bombs of some dark alliance?

Appearances may deceive; conceive too;

That emotion of poetry, song and dance:

Taut bodies brush lightly on a dance floor

Ignite electric wires by instinct, chance …

 

That connect us here, there and somewhere else

We worship this altar heaving secrets;

Drop by drop - joy by joy - quickening pulse -

Gasping for air - latent energy thrusts!

Gates of heaven encased in human form;

Gates of hell when cells migrate and transform!

(c)deo, 5/3/2007

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on May 3, 2007 at 3:09 PM | link to this | reply

I'm glad your heart is done bleeding. .

I currently have a band-aid on mine, which seems to be working out well.

posted by stbond on May 3, 2007 at 1:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: beautiful---Star--thank you so much.Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 3, 2007 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by star4sky5 on May 3, 2007 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

Your are most welcome, Beautiful Lady

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on May 3, 2007 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris Hallo Kat my friend--many thanks for your kind words! It's quite

amazing how many times-'blogit poets'-inspire each one of us!! Bye for now my friend-Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 3, 2007 at 3:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Scramble...Wonderful stuff ... Beautifulk and powerful! Chili--thank

you so much for your positive response-always very welcome!Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 3, 2007 at 3:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: scramble Thank you so much-Foliage-I appreciate your comments! Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 3, 2007 at 3:31 AM | link to this | reply

Scramble...Wonderful stuff ... Beautifulk and powerful!

posted by Chilitree on May 2, 2007 at 11:15 PM | link to this | reply

scramble

Ah lovely!  And I loved the forward thrust at the end.  My favourite technique! 

posted by FoliageGold on May 2, 2007 at 1:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris--excellent; hopefully full recovery

Thank you scriber-I think I'm just about there!Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 2, 2007 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply

Chris--excellent; hopefully full recovery

posted by scriber on May 2, 2007 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Great pain & anguish-great healing--wonderful testimony. We love U Chris.YP

Neil-what can I say? What an absolutely beautifull picture you have sent to me! I truly Love it! I'm going to look at the site.Thank you so much! shalomfromchris.

posted by Scramble on May 2, 2007 at 10:20 AM | link to this | reply

Great pain & anguish-great healing--wonderful testimony. We love U Chris.YP

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on May 2, 2007 at 10:03 AM | link to this | reply

Re: scramble

Lustorlove-many thanks for looking in and -YES---there IS EVERY HOPE FOR YOU TOO! If I can get there-so can you.Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 2, 2007 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: This is so beautiful .. I so believe that love is the great healer.

proc-thank you so much for your comments! I too-believe that LOVE is the great healer!Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 2, 2007 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: NAJWA-what an absolutely beautifull response from yo!!!

Thank you so much my friend.Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 2, 2007 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Scramble

Thank you very much Justie. Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 2, 2007 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

scramble

maybe there is hope for me yet

posted by Lanetay on May 1, 2007 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

This is so beautiful .. I so believe that love is the great healer.

posted by proc on May 1, 2007 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

WHEN THEY COUNTED THE QUALITIES OF THE PENS THEY HAD FIND YOUR PEN FROM DAIMOND< AND WHEN GOD CALLED OUR SOULS WITH THE HOLY NAMES WE FIND YOUR SOUL THE STRENTH OF LOVE
YOUR FRIEND THE STRANGER,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,najwa

posted by NAJWA on May 1, 2007 at 3:09 PM | link to this | reply

Scramble

Overcoming defeat is the goal. Good poem.

posted by Justi on May 1, 2007 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Excellent, Chris - if that doesn't spread a message of hope, nothing will!!

Hi Tony-thanks very much! I do hope that some things I write proves that there is light at the end of the tunnel!Bye for now-Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 1, 2007 at 12:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris

Many thanks Kat my friend-equally I am happy to be your friend! Thank you.I was at a place over the w/e that just compelled meto write this one.Bye for now-Chris.

posted by Scramble on May 1, 2007 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent, Chris - if that doesn't spread a message of hope, nothing will!!

posted by Antonionioni on May 1, 2007 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

Chris

You have been through so much , Your a very strong woman that I am glad to call my friend

posted by Kat02 on May 1, 2007 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply