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Re: Excellent poem. might suggest last word be "beating."
thank you for sharing your thoughts...I value your suggestions very much and please keep them coming...I am constantly editing and making changes...many so many revisions...I began with beating and kept making changes...
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Faithfulword
on April 30, 2007 at 4:07 PM
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P.S. I hesitate to recomment changes, since I am constantly finding
things to change in my poems, and assume you would have found this without my aid...
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on April 30, 2007 at 2:53 PM
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Excellent poem. might suggest last word be "beating."
posted by
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on April 30, 2007 at 2:50 PM
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LOVE FOREVER,,,,,
,,,,,,,,,the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on April 30, 2007 at 2:28 PM
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Michael
Sweet she will love it.
posted by
Justi
on April 30, 2007 at 2:27 PM
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