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                    Nice poem.WEll written.
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on April 30, 2007 at 7:06 PM
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                    Great!
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Antonionioni
                     on April 30, 2007 at 12:42 PM
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                    This I could really see happening 
                
                Wonderful post 
                
                    posted by
                    Kat02
                     on April 30, 2007 at 12:41 PM
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