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I AM SORRY, PERHAPS MY EYESIGHT IS NOT AS GOOD AS IT SHOULD BE, BUT YOUR COLOR SCHEME MAKES IT HARD FOR ME TO READ YOUR POEMS. i COULD READ ONLY ONE OF YOUR POEMS, WHICH I THOUGHT WAS AN EXCELLENT EFFORT. HOWEVER, I WOULD LOVE TO BE ABLE TO READ THE REST OF THEM.
posted by
chakazulu
on May 10, 2007 at 10:58 PM
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Strangely good...excellent work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 7, 2007 at 5:46 AM
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You gave me a mindful of eternity, mercurysky. And its dark...
posted by
saul_relative
on May 1, 2007 at 12:37 PM
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Simple little poem personifying a dead person
posted by
Straightforward
on April 30, 2007 at 8:32 PM
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beautiful expressions....
posted by
star4sky5
on April 30, 2007 at 8:15 PM
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This is one scary poem. So many people who have had near death
experiences describe it like that.
posted by
proc
on April 30, 2007 at 6:36 PM
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Ouch, my eyes are aching - they were anyway, it's not your fault!
I like the subject matter and the imagination. Colour and individual design is good by the way - keep it up.
posted by
Antonionioni
on April 30, 2007 at 12:52 PM
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posted by
julie_kristine
on April 30, 2007 at 12:39 PM
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WHEN I DIED
I hope you are resurrected. Then you may write a poem about that.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on April 30, 2007 at 7:52 AM
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Wow that was a wild poem
But I really enjoyed it , If you could make it a little lighter that would help better to read
posted by
Kat02
on April 30, 2007 at 7:46 AM
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