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ohhhhhhhhhhhh....felt the drumbeat in my blood......... yikes! --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 29, 2007 at 7:16 AM
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we are the one to decide the taste of the fruit... then we are the one to let the seed turn into a plant... or not!Good words. True feelings 
posted by
pelagus
on April 29, 2007 at 7:09 AM
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But what does it all mean?!
It's really good, though. Lots of big words.
Love can sweep you off your feet
and carry you along
in a way you've never known before.
But the ride always ends,
and you end up feeling lonely and bitter.
Wait.
It's not love I'm describing.
I'm thinking of a monorail.
posted by
Mademoiselle
on April 29, 2007 at 6:47 AM
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Bhaskar.ing ==thanks, appreciate your comment...
posted by
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on April 29, 2007 at 6:22 AM
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"Pleasure harvest from barren soil". What a beautiful expression!!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 29, 2007 at 5:31 AM
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Re: --surprising how many enjoy pain.
posted by
scriber
on April 29, 2007 at 5:30 AM
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Re: Good work. Hurt me.--ha, ha. I'll leave that to the blonde...
posted by
scriber
on April 29, 2007 at 5:29 AM
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Re: NAJWA--true. Mental pain is the longest and maybe, worst...
posted by
scriber
on April 29, 2007 at 5:28 AM
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Great... I may relate!
posted by
michael_pilarte
on April 29, 2007 at 3:55 AM
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Good work. Hurt me.
posted by
mark2556
on April 29, 2007 at 3:53 AM
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NAJWA--thanks much. Appreciate your insiteful comment...
posted by
scriber
on April 29, 2007 at 3:46 AM
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It is very strong and perfect Your POEM has many meanings and double subjects very intelgent way to express .................
but if some one hurt the other deep down in the soul creating an no ending sadness it caused the reaction in every word written in our songs , some time we have to get it out to hail our pains, .....................the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on April 29, 2007 at 3:40 AM
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