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liked the poem. But didn't understand from it what are the features of
senryu

posted by Straightforward on April 27, 2007 at 10:20 AM | link to this | reply

Great! A mini-meditation. Well done.

posted by Antonionioni on April 26, 2007 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

It's simply beautiful.

posted by afzal50 on April 26, 2007 at 12:28 AM | link to this | reply

Nice
I would pick a wide and thin blade of grass, place it between my thumbs and perform my rendition of Beethoven's Sixth Symphony.

posted by cpklapper on April 25, 2007 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply