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                    liked the poem. But didn't understand from it what are the features of 
                
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                    posted by
                    Straightforward
                     on April 27, 2007 at 10:20 AM
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                    Great! A mini-meditation. Well done.
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Antonionioni
                     on April 26, 2007 at 5:17 AM
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                    It's simply beautiful.
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on April 26, 2007 at 12:28 AM
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                    Nice
                
                I would pick a wide and thin blade of grass, place it between my thumbs and perform my rendition of Beethoven's Sixth Symphony.
                
                    posted by
                    cpklapper
                     on April 25, 2007 at 9:02 PM
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