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Awesome ending
I absolutely love this, "I am determined to love you slowly, without breaking records for time." I get the feeling you were trying to write the love poem to end all love poems with this one. We can all stop writing on love now; you've done it for the rest of us
posted by
Discombobulated78
on April 29, 2007 at 2:56 AM
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Re: JUST STAY IN LOVE./
Thank you, I will do just that!
posted by
Faithfulword
on April 24, 2007 at 11:07 AM
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JUST STAY IN LOVE./
posted by
star4sky5
on April 24, 2007 at 7:25 AM
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Faithfulword Excellent love poem
When reading this all I could think of this is exactelly what a love poem should be , Your words flow so well wonderful job
I look foward to reading more of your work
posted by
Kat02
on April 23, 2007 at 12:39 PM
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Re: Most enjoyable, Michael. Well done!
Thanks Tonyzonit, This is my wife's favorite poem. I wrote this for her before we got engaged.
posted by
Faithfulword
on April 23, 2007 at 9:14 AM
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Most enjoyable, Michael. Well done!
Especially towards the start there are some very imaginatively related images and comparisons.
posted by
Antonionioni
on April 23, 2007 at 6:21 AM
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Re: slowly w/o breaking records for time
Thanks for you response, i'm happy to know that you enjoyed it.
posted by
Faithfulword
on April 23, 2007 at 5:15 AM
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Re: Well expressed .
glad you enjoyed this poem. Its one of my favorites
posted by
Faithfulword
on April 23, 2007 at 5:14 AM
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Well expressed .
posted by
afzal50
on April 23, 2007 at 12:33 AM
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Excellent verses.
posted by
Munih
on April 22, 2007 at 9:20 PM
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