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drohan254--thanks for comment, much appreciated...

posted by scriber on April 18, 2007 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

drohan--thanks. Nothing angers like losing a meal ticket...lol.

posted by scriber on April 18, 2007 at 7:11 AM | link to this | reply

Mark--facing the demons...

posted by scriber on April 18, 2007 at 7:09 AM | link to this | reply

TT--thanks.

posted by scriber on April 18, 2007 at 7:09 AM | link to this | reply

hope for a happy ending. lol. thanks.

posted by scriber on April 18, 2007 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

NAJWA--In the story, the aunt is angry at losing Mary, the
young dancer and party girl she calls her daughter, but is actually her niece.  thanks for your comment.  

posted by scriber on April 18, 2007 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply

Slowly I turned. Step by step....inch by inch....

posted by mark2556 on April 18, 2007 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply

soooooooo beautifully written ,infectious anger as it is so deeply expressed 

posted by drohan254 on April 18, 2007 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

scriber
A beautiful description of something awful

posted by TIMMYTALES on April 17, 2007 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

scriber
Ooooooooh, the pain of unrequitted love.  You amaze me tonight!  --Joy!Mary 

posted by FoliageGold on April 17, 2007 at 7:37 PM | link to this | reply

oh scriber??????????? who can make anger as this??? I am sorry about this poem it is sad and angry but it is perfect too
the stranger

posted by NAJWA on April 17, 2007 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply