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Foliage - aaahh- but you forgot to mention.....men....
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 13, 2007 at 3:26 AM
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shadow
Really? Where do you live, I'll be right over. I love insects, birds, trees & flowers! --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 12, 2007 at 8:17 AM
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moonspirit - thanks for lifting MY spirits...you're a dearie...
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 12, 2007 at 8:01 AM
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Foliage - Between you & me....you're one step ahead of me! It's really
tough being single, living like a hermit deep in the mountains, with insects, birds, trees & flowers for company !
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 12, 2007 at 8:00 AM
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WOW!! Very good!! MoonSpirit 
posted by
syzygy
on April 12, 2007 at 7:46 AM
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shadow
silly! Now why would you be this way? I haven't had a date since last Saturday. --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 12, 2007 at 7:43 AM
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Foliage - Oh Oh.....Am I feeling a little bit envious..??
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 12, 2007 at 7:35 AM
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Thank you shadow, you're welcome, but I'm a dense poet.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 12, 2007 at 6:19 AM
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shadow
I am! Guess I'm preparing to be romanced again this weekend. --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 12, 2007 at 6:18 AM
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Bhaskar - with those magical descriptive adjectives I could have
added another line or two and my poem would have been so much better! Thanks for the kind comment.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 12, 2007 at 6:17 AM
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Foliage - You must be SO enarmored with the joys of love & life.....
that you even take my breath away! And your sigh... what's up with that? I love your enthusiastic response.. and yes I do love that interplay between the beautiful rose and anything of beauty it can portray...even a beautiful woman.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 12, 2007 at 6:14 AM
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shadow-pen
What a lovely, evocative, felicitous, fragrant, romantic poem!!!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 12, 2007 at 6:13 AM
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Star - I know you always appreciate my work... thanks sweetie.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 12, 2007 at 6:09 AM
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Troosha - Ooo lah lah ! You sound like an aroused French woman haha..
I'm very much tempted to be responsible for your next meltdown.....hmmm shall i be the devil???
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 12, 2007 at 6:08 AM
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Tony - thanks. Recorded treasures become good memories...
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 12, 2007 at 6:01 AM
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OTA- yes the memory of someone special I had in my life for
six years, but she always looked for more beyond me. I had to let it go because the relationship became too painful.....but the beautiful memories are still there....
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 12, 2007 at 6:00 AM
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Shadow
some memory burns inside you that we are so blessed to see shadows of..
posted by
Blue_feathers
on April 11, 2007 at 2:45 PM
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I love that line about the recorded treasure, Shadow.
That is so true.
posted by
Antonionioni
on April 11, 2007 at 2:09 PM
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Shadow
Ooo lah, lah..... Do you give these poems to your lady? If a man wrote me a poem, such as the ones you create, I'd melt. Beautifully done!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on April 11, 2007 at 9:18 AM
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Beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on April 11, 2007 at 8:17 AM
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shadow
Sigh......yes, the rose. And this flower symbolizes so many things, so your poem can be construed in so many ways. And I would so love to feel like this again! Thank you so much for the lovely breath! --Joy!Mary
(I seem to be writing the word, 'so' a lot today; wonder what's up with that?)
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 11, 2007 at 7:40 AM
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