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Good, " words fail me when things hit " is right: many times for me individual words look too garish until they are well knitted into a complex sentence which is also demanding on the reader: beware of words. See you.

posted by FIVEBRIAREUS5 on September 5, 2007 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

straightforward
This one is really espressive of life up and down and in and outs! Thanks, dosommmm

posted by dosomegood on June 19, 2007 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

Straightforward -It adds up to a thoughtful poem...

posted by scriber on April 7, 2007 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply