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lustorlove---many thanks.I'm sure it sounds familiar to many!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 5, 2007 at 3:46 AM
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Hallo RI.thank you very much indeed! Whether we ryhme or not-we each
have our own unique way of writing poetry---and I ALWAYS LOVE reading you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 5, 2007 at 3:45 AM
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star-thank you so much-for the beautifull garden of flowers.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 5, 2007 at 3:43 AM
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drohan--many thanks.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 5, 2007 at 3:42 AM
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Chris.."the flickering embers will blaze again"...a very positive powerful
line..
..great poem (wish I could get more rhyme into mine the way you do)..
...
posted by
Rumor
on April 4, 2007 at 8:34 PM
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scramble
sounds familiar
posted by
Lanetay
on April 4, 2007 at 5:52 PM
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a garden for you
posted by
star4sky5
on April 4, 2007 at 1:53 PM
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beautiful and deep scramble
posted by
drohan254
on April 4, 2007 at 1:48 PM
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Strength Of Mine--Thank you so much for those lovely words! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 4, 2007 at 1:41 PM
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This is amazingly beautiful!!
posted by
Strength_Of_Mine
on April 4, 2007 at 1:17 PM
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Hallo Shadow--thank you for popping in-reading and your lovely response!
I'm pleased you liked it.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 4, 2007 at 7:50 AM
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Many thanks Chilitree--and for the roses! Chris.
one for you.
posted by
Scramble
on April 4, 2007 at 7:48 AM
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Chris - There were days I felt exactly like you did......and you
have put it across so honestly with warmth. It felt good reading it, extra so because of the poetic style & rhyming. Thanks for this.
posted by
shadow-pen
on April 4, 2007 at 7:24 AM
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Lovely...
posted by
Chilitree
on April 4, 2007 at 4:29 AM
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Hi Tony--Thank you very much! I love the 'springing from your pen'!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 4, 2007 at 2:34 AM
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Chris - nice to see these love poems springing from your pen!
posted by
Antonionioni
on April 3, 2007 at 12:42 PM
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Kat-my friend-wonderfull to hear from you and Thank you so much!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 3, 2007 at 12:12 PM
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Chris
This poem was written with so much passion and desire , Keep up the wonderful work
posted by
Kat02
on April 3, 2007 at 12:08 PM
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Hallo NAJWA my friend--thank you so much for your kind words!
God bless-Chris.
and a
posted by
Scramble
on April 3, 2007 at 11:50 AM
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It's my pleasure Lady-I enjoy reading your Poems-very much.
I am pleased you like this one.Thanks-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 3, 2007 at 11:48 AM
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Mary-Thank you very much-I appreciate that! Actually-I would really like to
be able to write in a more 'smooth running'-style-like a river flowing-but so far I am not able-I also find I do not have enough 'vocabulary'--but maybe later-who knows?There are many beautifull poets on here-producing the kinds of material that I would like to.Still-it would not do for us all to be the same-would it? Thanks again-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 3, 2007 at 11:46 AM
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THE Soul who wrote this POEM is the kindness, the tenderness,
the AMAZING LOVE in each ray of your SOUL.....the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on April 3, 2007 at 10:10 AM
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scramble...thanks for reading me....I like your work as well
very sensual
posted by
ladyofshalott
on April 3, 2007 at 10:03 AM
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scramble
Oh my! Well done! I'm so amazed at how adept you are at rhyming.... --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on April 3, 2007 at 9:33 AM
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Thank you Troosha! Actually it's an 'oldie' and I WAS waiting for my' part
time'guy secret love! Whoops! Shocking life I led! Thanks again Troosha-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 3, 2007 at 9:18 AM
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Scramble
How beautiful!
I wonder who you're waiting for....some in your life or someone you wish was in your life?
posted by
Troosha
on April 3, 2007 at 8:38 AM
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