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Hallo Neil.Many thanks for yourencouragement-all round and always!
They really do 'come easily'-(when I have the 'space to write') However-I am beginning now-not to take ONLY my first words-but to go back and extend a bit.shalomfromchris.

posted by Scramble on April 1, 2007 at 3:41 AM | link to this | reply

You're welcome RI.Many thanks for your response too.Lovely.Chris.

posted by Scramble on April 1, 2007 at 3:38 AM | link to this | reply

Mary-many thanks for your enthusiasti response! It really 'lifts' me.Chris.

posted by Scramble on April 1, 2007 at 3:37 AM | link to this | reply

Way to go!The first part could symbolize how Sundays make us shining stars
Of course, the latter part and the entire poem, speak to Nature's gifts and healthy benedictions on us all fauna and flora. I like the flow you achieve in your poems. Do they really come easily or do you force them at times? shalomfromneil

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on March 31, 2007 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

a great pick-me-up poem, Chris..:)..just what I needed after a busy shift
at work...thanks...

posted by Rumor on March 31, 2007 at 2:30 PM | link to this | reply

Scramble
BRAVA!  I can hear the song of gratitude singing through your words today.  Well done!  --Joy!Mary 

posted by FoliageGold on March 31, 2007 at 2:17 PM | link to this | reply