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Re: i wonder also ..so beautiful scriber--thanks much drohan254...
posted by
scriber
on April 24, 2007 at 2:54 PM
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Re: scriber--Bhaskar.ing--there are some passages maybe; but no, Miller
was the great wordsmith; I did not try to copy him, just the basic thing he did; which was to record life as he saw it.
posted by
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on April 24, 2007 at 2:50 PM
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Re: scriber--editing--I see you have to go to the write section. Got it.
posted by
scriber
on April 24, 2007 at 2:47 PM
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Does it sound like Tropic of Capricorn?
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 23, 2007 at 6:10 PM
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i wonder also ..so beautiful scriber
posted by
drohan254
on March 30, 2007 at 10:14 PM
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Odd how that happens with the brain, yes? I don't know why you can't edit, either as it's usually easy to do. It's another good poem. --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on March 30, 2007 at 7:07 PM
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FoliageGold--Yes, it might work like that; I see a couple of needed
changes, but can't because I can't edit my material after posting. Don't know why. I could remove it and edit it in Word. Maybe I'll do that tomorrow...thanks....
posted by
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on March 30, 2007 at 7:03 PM
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posted by
A-and-B
on March 30, 2007 at 3:30 PM
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Another well-written rendition. For some reason when my mind reached the word, 'proclamation', I read, 'prohibition'. Don't know why. Take a look. --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on March 30, 2007 at 2:08 PM
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afzal50--thanks for gracious compliment...
posted by
scriber
on March 30, 2007 at 1:46 PM
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MoonSpirit--Add ter the short line of "snappers" in literature.
posted by
scriber
on March 30, 2007 at 1:44 PM
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Scramble--Wow, you're speechless; I'm speechless...but thanks...
posted by
scriber
on March 30, 2007 at 1:42 PM
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Troosha--thanks as always for commenting on my umble insertions...
posted by
scriber
on March 30, 2007 at 1:41 PM
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MoonSpirit--the toothless wonder...thanks...
posted by
scriber
on March 30, 2007 at 1:40 PM
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Wow! I'm speachless!
posted by
Scramble
on March 30, 2007 at 1:05 PM
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you're raw and wild dats fo shur!
posted by
Troosha
on March 30, 2007 at 9:19 AM
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Nice poem.
posted by
afzal50
on March 30, 2007 at 9:09 AM
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'Snappy' poem! MoonSpirit 
posted by
syzygy
on March 30, 2007 at 8:40 AM
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mark2556---Right: good snapper, down snapper, be nice...
posted by
scriber
on March 30, 2007 at 7:29 AM
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Good snapper.
posted by
mark2556
on March 30, 2007 at 6:56 AM
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