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posted by
A-and-B
on March 30, 2007 at 3:29 PM
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thanks, moonspirit, TAPs...for your encouraging words...
posted by
scriber
on March 29, 2007 at 6:07 AM
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scriber
I especially liked the last four lines. They made me smile.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 28, 2007 at 8:28 PM
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Ah, Justi, so...thanks....
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2007 at 7:22 PM
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Many thanks, Moon Spirit...
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2007 at 7:21 PM
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Scriber
Oh such words for blues.... I can hear the rhythm too.... Nice.
posted by
Justi
on March 28, 2007 at 4:51 PM
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You are quite gifted and have a sharp mind. Peace, Brother. MoonSpirit 
posted by
syzygy
on March 28, 2007 at 12:04 PM
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NAJWA--In this unfortunate man's experience, the blue birds didn't sing
often enough, like once in a blue moon. I agree, would have been better for him, and possibly her, if the birds sang a little more often. In his poem, it just happened to be Sunday when the first bird of spring shoose to sing. lol and thanks...
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2007 at 9:29 AM
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scriber
Ah, okay, I thought that was it, but wanted to check and make sure before I put my foot in my mouth! Exploring the, ‘seasons’ in our lives and what is acceptable via the conventions of what are considered, ‘sins’ is what I took from your poem. If we ignore what is possibly, ‘right’, and choose the other way, indeed it is feasible that our, ‘bluebird of happiness’ is false. And therefore the reactions we seek from others are false as well. And a false sense of belonging is borne. Well done. I loved this poem! –Joy!Mary 
posted by
FoliageGold
on March 28, 2007 at 9:27 AM
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Mars Gold...Thanks much for your question, which I shall attempt to answer.
"He were morally ifen nor legally tied". It would be more understandable and correct English, if I had written: "He was morally, if not legally, tied." The accents are on morally and legally. My poems often contain "sound like words," colloquies and grammatical errors left there by my need for a certain rhythmetic effect. So, "ifen" means merely "if." The "Nor" naturally replaces "not" and has a connection to "mor" in morally. I'm getting confused...
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2007 at 9:14 AM
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I LOVE THE BLUE BIRD SONG IT IS REAL AND TRUE EVERY DAY NOT ONLY SUNDAY>>>WHY SUNDAY MY FRIEND????
posted by
NAJWA
on March 28, 2007 at 9:04 AM
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scriber
I have more comments to make, but could you please tell me what the word, 'ifer' means? --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on March 28, 2007 at 8:19 AM
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Star4you--thanks friend for visit. Bring Rock Star with you next time...
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2007 at 8:06 AM
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Scriber, nice to read you....
posted by
star4sky5
on March 28, 2007 at 7:34 AM
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Mark--right, I've heard it say alligator belching turn women on...
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2007 at 5:51 AM
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Scriber ~ They don't really sing as much as they wilt in the heat.
But the alligators make up for it by belching incessantly, so it all works out.
posted by
mark2556
on March 28, 2007 at 5:28 AM
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beautiful one
posted by
drohan254
on March 28, 2007 at 5:13 AM
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beautiful one
posted by
drohan254
on March 28, 2007 at 5:13 AM
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Good style .
posted by
afzal50
on March 28, 2007 at 5:05 AM
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mark2556--so when do de bluebirds sing???
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2007 at 4:57 AM
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OTA--many thanks, and likewise...
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2007 at 4:56 AM
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And THAT's why I live where there are only two seasons.
Tourist and Hot.
posted by
mark2556
on March 28, 2007 at 4:54 AM
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Scriber
I love the way you write.
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 28, 2007 at 4:41 AM
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