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wow shadow......
posted by
star4sky5
on March 28, 2007 at 7:10 AM
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cpklapper -
Thanks. You're correct, that was the significant part of the poem, reflecting on powerful moments of silence can be. It means a lot of different things to different people.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:43 AM
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Shadow, you are welcome.
posted by
Chilitree
on March 28, 2007 at 5:42 AM
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Chilitree - appreciate you stopping by for a read. Thanks.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:41 AM
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Kat -
I felt a warmness reading your generous comment. Also humbleness in the high praise you give my work. Thanks so much for your upliftment, may the next piece bring you joy as well.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:39 AM
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Very beautiful poem.
posted by
Chilitree
on March 28, 2007 at 5:38 AM
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FoliageGold -
Yes I am a gentle & kind spirit who honours the beauty & love eminating from a woman. And so I shall always praise them from the depth of my being. GOD really created women as unique. I will take your hand when it reaches me.b Thanks
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:33 AM
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Najwa -
"Speechless in the beauty of Silence", thanks for this sincere comment, it's not often you can be silenced! Yes but silence is also a powerful medium of appreciation of GOD'S benevolence.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:29 AM
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Chris -
Thanks for the read and a appreciative comment. It keeps me motivated.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:26 AM
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Proc -
So glad that it's serenity appealed to you. One of the many facets that one could read into the poem. Have a peaceful day ahead.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:24 AM
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Afzal - Appreciate you stopping by for a read. Thanks
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:22 AM
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Troosha -
your comments make me feel humble & thankful that I can be an inspiration to others who are appreciative of my writing. I'm happy that you share such moments of silence, especially with someone special. Aren't they powerful, more so than sounds?
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:18 AM
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Lindo -WOW...you are obviously an avid reader of arabic poets...hence I
feel chuffed & honoured by your comments. I simply love Khalil Gibran's works, a little bit Rumi but also read a lot of Sufi philosopy. Shakespeare is also one of my favorites.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:12 AM
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OTA - Trust you to notice most of the comments are from women!
My Muse? She's obviously still around, she could be real, a shadow or a metaphor. and
what's more, she could even be a Rose? A soul mate but not a lover.....
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:07 AM
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Hana- thanks. I'm sure you find the silence moments most
appreciative as well, especially if you share it with someone else who understands you.
posted by
shadow-pen
on March 28, 2007 at 5:02 AM
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Nice writing, shadow!
I liked your ending as, I believe, has pretty much everyone else here.
posted by
cpklapper
on March 27, 2007 at 10:10 PM
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Shadow
look at all these women commenting on your work... now who is the muse???lol
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 27, 2007 at 8:21 PM
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Shadow
Wow this was totally a masterpeace very stunning , a poems I had read two times , You captured the peacefulness perfectly, I am so looking foward to your next peice of work
posted by
Kat02
on March 27, 2007 at 8:13 PM
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shadow-pen
Lovely, gentle and as peaceful as your spirit seems to be. Makes me just want to reach out and take your hand. Lovely, lovely, lovely! --Joy!Mary
posted by
FoliageGold
on March 27, 2007 at 5:17 PM
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i have no comment i am speachless and in the beauty of the silence..........
............the stranger
posted by
NAJWA
on March 27, 2007 at 2:09 PM
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How beautifull Shadow.
posted by
Scramble
on March 27, 2007 at 12:47 PM
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Its a lovely poem.Serenity flows through.
posted by
proc
on March 27, 2007 at 11:54 AM
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Great communication .
posted by
afzal50
on March 27, 2007 at 11:23 AM
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Shadow
In the silence.... yes it's in silence that we hear and feel so much. I felt as though the poem was being read to me (as appposed to me reading it) - it lifted off the screen with such grace.
posted by
Troosha
on March 27, 2007 at 11:16 AM
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posted by
NAJWA
on March 27, 2007 at 10:03 AM
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as always very beautiful
Your poems remind me of the masterpieces of the classical arabic poets Abu Fraas, Antara and Nizaar qabbani: eloquent, delicate, sincere yet very poignant at the same time.
posted by
lindo
on March 27, 2007 at 9:53 AM
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how can one comment on this..
it begs silence
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 27, 2007 at 7:38 AM
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the silence ..who can get time for the beauty of silence
the most beautiful thoughts and feeling it is born due to silence ...the unique the deep the strong personalities build from silence ..beautiful silence shadow
posted by
drohan254
on March 27, 2007 at 6:48 AM
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