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                    beautiful
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    star4sky5
                     on March 28, 2007 at 2:17 PM
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                    This piece
                
                has a great rhythm
                
                    posted by
                    malcolm
                     on March 25, 2007 at 9:56 AM
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                you write how I feel 
 
                
                    posted by
                    Lanetay
                     on March 25, 2007 at 9:49 AM
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                    Excellent work!
                
                     
     
  
                
                    posted by
                    teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
                     on March 25, 2007 at 3:20 AM
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                    I like this!
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    bel_1965
                     on March 22, 2007 at 6:17 AM
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                    instantly 
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on March 22, 2007 at 3:41 AM
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                    It touched my heart intstat;ly as I feel the same about my beloved Sunny.
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on March 22, 2007 at 3:41 AM
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                    I love it... I love it.
                
                     
     
     
  
                
                    posted by
                    1TimeSoldier
                     on March 22, 2007 at 3:14 AM
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                wonderful one.good rhyme.nice flow.intense emotions.
rithwik.lancs
                
                    posted by
                    rihwik.lancs
                     on March 22, 2007 at 1:47 AM
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                    Beautiful poem of love for annother.
                
                     
     
     
  
                
                    posted by
                    Chilitree
                     on March 22, 2007 at 12:52 AM
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